Not too bad at all
Alright, for the plus side, this version was much more enjoyable then jungle girl, and the storyline is pretty good. Also this has tenticles.. and everyone loves tenticles. Swear to god.
Now for the bad news, personally I think your style is lacking female detail, same with your fan art. However you do have alot of potential, and all you need to do is look at how other hentai artists capture the female form. My personal favorate H artist is Nekoi Mie, just take what they do and adapt it to your style, and your characters will take on a life of their own, also it will silence anyone who says your works are too "cartoony".
Thanks for reading this rant.
Too cartoony sounds funny to me. I mean, that is what hentai is ^^; Why not look at real porn?
Sometimes I get complements for having simple style. Often too much detail can be turn off for people.
Also this is animated and I am one person. A detailed picture is one thing but detail in animation is stupid amount of work.
Great Sprite Work, made me miss Mega Man X.
No doubt about it, great game, great engine, and wonderful sprite work, I'm sure Capcom would be proud. The only thing I would be critical about, was that you took something allready created, and made it into something to call your own. (I'm not refering to the sprites, cause you can change them, but to the fact that it is EXACTLY like playing Mega Man X(X), if you spiced it up, maybe made new levels, baddies, and or style of game, I would give you 10 out of 10 ON EVERYTHING!.. even HUMOUR!
Great Game none the less! Keep up the good work
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