Age/Gender: 27, Male
Location: Canada ON
Job: Graphic Designer
Check out my page ----= http://www.techtocal l.com/tdoane/ Thanks for viewing! Also check out : http://www.myspace.c om/thetruetombo ~Thomas
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Alright, for the plus side, this version was much more enjoyable then jungle girl, and the storyline is pretty good. Also this has tenticles.. and everyone loves tenticles. Swear to god.
Now for the bad news, personally I think your style is lacking female detail, same with your fan art. However you do have alot of potential, and all you need to do is look at how other hentai artists capture the female form. My personal favorate H artist is Nekoi Mie, just take what they do and adapt it to your style, and your characters will take on a life of their own, also it will silence anyone who says your works are too "cartoony".
Thanks for reading this rant.
~Thomas
Author's Response:
Too cartoony sounds funny to me. I mean, that is what hentai is ^^; Why not look at real porn?
Sometimes I get complements for having simple style. Often too much detail can be turn off for people.
Also this is animated and I am one person. A detailed picture is one thing but detail in animation is stupid amount of work.
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Wow.. that was increadable!, good job on the music selection, finger eleven went good with it.. I would suggest drag you down or tip by them. for later installments.
~Tombo
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"Amazing Piece of Work There My Friend... Very Nice"
Evertyhing about this animation is simply increadable. Nothing shy of entertaining. After watching this movie, I have found that the songs are quite remarkbly enjoyable, and while working, it always springs a smile at the sheer thought of the song lyrics. Not to mention random spirts of laughter... good times.. good times.
Please for the love of everything imaginable, continue working on this series.
~Tombo
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"That was incredible.. ooh.. my sides hurt."
As always, your works never dissapoint me, and in this case, it reduced me to bitter laughter.. of enjoyment!. The only thing I would say that was wrong is it was way too short. Look forward to seeing what other kind of villians Retarded Dog has to stop next.
~Tombo
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Ohh man that s$#@ is pretty good, if your straped for ideas, I would recommend Orlando opens the coffee joint, and takes a page out of Amsterdam and turns into a weed coffee shop, the place gets booming, and obviously they have some problems with the "five-O". Who knows.. I hope he gets back to DJing eventually.. kinda figured that after you dropped that bomb in this episode.
Good work, keep it up.
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Personally I found this short to be quite different from your work The Maxwell Edison Story, which was it's amazing draw towards the fans, but the transistion doesn't effect your style one bit! This was well done, however too short, if you ever considered making it a series, this could easily be used as the intro.
~Tombo
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Don't listen to anyone telling you this is crap, you did an awesome job, and it was pretty funny. Makes you wonder what is going to happen next.
~Tombo
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Very funny, even the censorship parts, which is even more priceless because of the ending. My only suggestion to you, is to add sound or voice overs, and secondly, to keep making more gems like this one.
~Tombo
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That is some very impressive work there. Your characters look extrememly well defined, and the storyline is more griping because it is based on a true story. If there is anything wrong with this movie, it is that your timing of events can be increased inorder to keep the audience more into the storyline.
Well done.
~Tombo
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Hey ValorXII... it says here you live in Collingwood.. is that Collingwood, Ontario?.. drop me a line sometime at thetruetombo(at)hotmail(dot)com.
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I have always been a big fan of TMNT.. and this new series is awesome.. instead of modernizing the show for kids.. they should do a show aimed at the audience of the original.. I enjoyed the addition of blood, and vulgarity.. it helped made it feel more real.
I seriously doubt you will ever loose the fanbase for this project, and it's too bad your site goes down from overuse of bandwidth..
See ya
~Thomas
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