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Alright, for the plus side, this version was much more enjoyable then jungle girl, and the storyline is pretty good. Also this has tenticles.. and everyone loves tenticles. Swear to god.

Now for the bad news, personally I think your style is lacking female detail, same with your fan art. However you do have alot of potential, and all you need to do is look at how other hentai artists capture the female form. My personal favorate H artist is Nekoi Mie, just take what they do and adapt it to your style, and your characters will take on a life of their own, also it will silence anyone who says your works are too "cartoony".

Thanks for reading this rant.
~Thomas

Author's Response:

Too cartoony sounds funny to me. I mean, that is what hentai is ^^; Why not look at real porn?

Sometimes I get complements for having simple style. Often too much detail can be turn off for people.

Also this is animated and I am one person. A detailed picture is one thing but detail in animation is stupid amount of work.

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Score: 10

"Simply amazing"

submission: Power Star 2

date: December 19, 2005

Wow.. that was increadable!, good job on the music selection, finger eleven went good with it.. I would suggest drag you down or tip by them. for later installments.

~Tombo

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Score: 10

"Amazing Piece of Work There My Friend... Very Nice"

submission: My Penis is Evil

date: December 14, 2005

Evertyhing about this animation is simply increadable. Nothing shy of entertaining. After watching this movie, I have found that the songs are quite remarkbly enjoyable, and while working, it always springs a smile at the sheer thought of the song lyrics. Not to mention random spirts of laughter... good times.. good times.

Please for the love of everything imaginable, continue working on this series.

~Tombo